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for writers who know they're onto something ggood —
Super Amazing Story Thing
No more guessing if you're making your novel better or worse. In the SAWT you'll learn for sure how to take your draft from just words on a page to a story that sings.
JOIN THE SUPER AMAZING WRITER THING
REAL TALK —
You don't have a writing problem.
Let's be honest, you know how to write. You've probably been writing for a while, and this probably isn't your first manuscript. You know wht a character is, you know what a plot is. You know all that stuff. You know you're talented.
But you're still stuck. Maybe even feeling a little lost in your book.
IMAGINE KNOWING what your book needs —
You have an editing one.
- Editing is all about the choices of your story and which ones to make.
- It's about discernment, knowing when something is done and when it needs more structure.
- It's about direction and momentum.
- It's about narrative distance and immersion.
- These are things you uncover, make and strenghten during edits.
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Learn the Secrets
I personally walk you through the editorial guidance I give my private, 1:1 writers that has helped them finish, query, get agented, and win awards.
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Apply the Secrets
Nothing inside is theory or put up against examples of books already published. Every exercise will be on your own story so you can see rapid results.
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Feel the Confidence
You've made your book better than it was before, giving you the confidence to query, self-pub, submit to magazines, or whatever your next step is.
HI,I'm bethany —
I help writers
GO FROM STUCK & FRUSTRATED TO FINISHED & READY.
And I want to help you do the same.
There's nothing worse than being stuck in the thick of your manuscript. It's like all your great ideas you were so excited about seem dumb now. Or you might feel like the story is just getting lost in all the telling. Or maybe you queried and got rejected and now you're wanting to make sure your manuscript is as strong as it can be before you go out again with it.
You've been working on your story for a reason. It obviously means something important — now make sure it's as amazing as it can be, so it has the best chance to be seen by as many readers as possible.
"I got agented."
Bethany’s unique writing [lessons] are NEXT LEVEL! With her help, I was able to sculpt my novel and get agented. She really knows her stuff!!
Emily Rae, represented by Mushens Entertainment
"Helped me with the most daunting revision."
Bethany helped me the most with the daunting revision process. The roadmaps and exercises helped with making me rethink my characters and returning to what exactly I had in mind when I started the draft. They’re a very useful tool for a high-level overview and a way to outline before starting the first draft to limit the amount of future revisions Thank you again!
"It was lifechanging."
It was lifechanging. I knocked my book out in three months because of it, and on my way to being agented! I’m one of your success stories.”
Chrissy, MG author repped by CMA Lit
introducing:
THE SUPER AMAZING STORY THING
*actual name forthcoming
Join the Sweet 16 as we go through the system that has helped my writers finish their stories, confidently query or self-pub, and get agented, get book deals and win awards. Spots are limited to just 16 for this Founders Round so save your seat now!
Remember, it's not about what you can put in your story that counts. It's about what readers take out of it. And that, my friend, is all about how you edit.
the plan
Here's how this works:
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Join & Save Your Seat
We begin January 10, 2027 with a live, epic kick off call. First class is the following Tuesday at 7pm ET. Because this is the Founders Round, seats are limited. First come, first serve so be sure to get your spot.
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Choose Your Manuscript
The entire purpose of the Super Amazing Story Thing is for your story to get better as we go. That's why we're not using generic templates or already-published books as examples. We're working on your stuff. So choose your manuscript.
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Show Up, Apply, Change
We meet weekly for eight weeks, and during that time, we're going to move with focus, purpose, and strategy. Show up and do the work and see it in your pages.
WHAT'S INSIDE
During our eight weeks together, you get:
Eight Weeks of Live Zoom Calls With Bethany
We are diving DEEP here! You and me will go over a different aspect of story every week - from character journey and chemistry to pacing to scene economics and magic logic. Every lesson is purposeful and strategic with a goal to show you exactly how to edit each one.
$5,000 Value
Weekly Assignments & Open Q&A
The magic is in the doing, and you'll be David Copperfield by the time we're done! Because frankly, it's not enough to just edit with me once a week. You have to work with your manuscript to really see results.
$2,000 Value
My Eyes On Your Work
Not only will I be reading your first 10 pages BEFORE you really begin edits on them, but I'll then read them after the eight weeks we're together. Then, we'll go over my feedback in our own private 1:1 session.
$800 Value
Ready to Join Me?
"I can go on and on about how insightful and brilliant Bethany is, but TL;DR: Bethany is the best and if you want to improve your MS you need her!”
– jesse sutanto, bestselling author of dial a for aunties
"Her feedback is smart, thoughtful and always helps make for a better book. I highly recommend Bethany’s service to authors in need of an extra set of eagle eyes attached to a very astute mind."
– tiffany reisz, usa today bestseller
"The Hook Formula paid for itself within 48 hours. I rewrote three captions and my engagement doubled. I'm not exaggerating."
– Camille S., Digital Product Creator
"I used to spend two hours writing a caption. Now it takes me 15 minutes and it's actually good. Life-changing is not too strong a word."
– Priya M., Health Coach
"The lessons reshaped the way I think about writing…oh, and I may or may not have gotten an offer after I revised based on things I learned."
– demi schwartz, repped by spencerhill associates
"When I needed her most, Bethany came to my rescue with succinct edits and a can-do attitude. Her suggestions were thoughtful, insightful, and made my work shine in a way I never would have been able to do on my own."
– anthony nerada, repped by deborah harris agency
is this for you?
The Super Amazing Writer Thing
is for you if:
You're a writer who takes your writing seriously. You want it to be a career.
You’ve been working with your story for a while and you're feeling lost in it.
You want to save time and energy and get the guidance and expertise to learn how to make your book amazing.
You’re tired of piecing together free advice and want one cohesive strategy
You’re coachable, committed, and willing to actually implement the stuff (non-negotiable)
Ready to get started?
Join now and save big.
Join Full Access
$997
AFTER THE FOUNDERS ROUND, THE PRICE GOES TO $1,997
- 8 weeks of live Zoom sessions (Tuesdays 7pm ET)
- Weekly assignments
- Open Q&A
- A private session with me where I'll review your first 10 pages with you
- All sessions recorded
- Lifetime access to recordings
- A fraction of the cost of 1:1 private coaching/editorial services
I'm going to be completely upfront
There are no refunds.
Because this experience is taught live, and because it's already a very discounted Founders Round, there are no refunds given at any time for any reason.
But here's the thing: I know what I'm doing. I edit books for a living. It's been my full time job since the end of 2019 (and I've been editing and teaching college-level creative writing part time since 2008) and if I sucked at it, people would not keep trusting me with their stories.
I am not going to steer you wrong. What I am going to do is give to you every ounce of what I know about taking a rough draft and making it better. Do I promise it'll be publish ready or agent ready? No. Because edits take time. And your story might need another round or two after our time ends. That's exactly why you get lifetime access to the recordings.
What I can tell you is that if you show up, do the work, trust the process and really apply the changes (aka don't be afraid of the delete key) you'll have a better understanding of how to make not just this book stronger, but all the others you write, too.
I got you. ❤️